All Comments on 'My Internship'

by Xesevoli

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feelingbravefeelingbraveabout 20 years ago
And...?

Good as far as it went but felt like you stopped in the middle of a sentence. Hope there is a part two.

JacobysSlaveJacobysSlaveabout 12 years ago

I never thought I was interested in exhibitionist & voyeur but hot damn you have made me a fan, and as with all your writing the detail in which you write is amazing and transports me there! Leaves me wishing I could see what happens next with them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story, but missing a closure

So what happened next? Did they get together? Did they marry? The "end" feels really cut off.

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