All Comments on 'My Lactation Slave Ch. 04'

This has been a consistently erotic series, which I have definitely enjoyed.

I do not know much about BSDM and don't think I personally am into it much, but in its own way this series has been an extended romance, and I love it for that.

Your storytelling is great and it kept me coming back for more. Hope you keep writing!

My I congratulate the author on a well written and balanced story from start to finish.

Keep up the good work.

Your an excellent wordsmith and errors are easy to overlook throughout the story due to it's excellent storyline.

I really hope you do followup stories about Master Jack, Master Jessie, Master Tony and their slaves and the new club.

I have so enjoyed the series. I look forward to man more adventures with this extraordinary couple.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and i hope there may be a sequel. I personally would love to see him breeding his slave for real.

Please keep writing.

This story was very nicely wrote, I read all of it I enjoyed the story line much. It is rare to read such a good story these days. The way he did this story was great. I liked how he let you know how both the master and slave was feeling at all times. Please write some more about them soon sir. Once again thank you for a very special story.

The use of switching back and forth between Melinda and Jack's views of things was wonderful. That had to be a difficult way to write, but it was perfect.

There was a lot of BDSM, but overall, this is a love story. In my dreams I would switch with Melinda in a heartbeat.

Some minor errors, but nothing that detracted from the story. If Lancer would like an editor, I'm more than willing. I'm registered with Literotica. It would be fun to go over this story in detail with a willing partner, WEG

Love the characters! Could you have another story with a former friend from Oklahoma come and visit Tit Slave in her new lifestyle.

Your story is fascinating. I hope this is just a break and not the end.

I loved the story! Like the other comments, I hope you'll continue the story somehow. I couldn't put it down. I read it all in 2 days. Lots of reading!

Well done

The best lactation/slave story I've read so far on this website.

It's a shame that this is your only story here.

I must say I have read a few BDSM stories, and it is disappointing to me how many "painsluts" never have to endure more than a wimpy spanking in their punishment sessions. Its pathetic! The pain inflicted on Melinda definitely surpassed many other stories of similar plot. The needles were bad, but I think the rose stem was worse! What if she got an infection??? Being a woman, it is easier to think of things like that, and it can get in the way of the pleasure. But in the end, you went beyond many other authors in the "ceremony" scene. Thank you, and do write more. There were many errors/typos that were borderline hard to ignore, but as others have stated, it was a really good plot-line, and really left me with no other choice than to finish it. Well done. Be sure and find an editor for your next story/series.

I ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY!!!! NICE ENDING!!!

The only negative comment about this is that directly after the wedding/collaring Big Tits asking for punishment! I was sorry that I could only give you 5 *'s, now having said that . . .

You have a gift. I stayed up all night just so I could finish this story to find out how it ended. I was also transported to stand as a spector and watch Big Tits and Jack (& all of the others) as they milked and screwed BT's various holes! I could almost feel all of her anguish and pain and joy myself in my own tits and clit!! It was awesome! Please continue writing as you are truly a wordsmith!! Thank you for a wonderful story.

I'm not into pain, yet enjoyed the entire series.

Incredibly well written, keeping your attention throughout despite it's length.

Lovely “Hollywood” Ending!

May they live in sexual harmony …forever..