All Comments on 'My Lesbian Sugar Mama Pt. 03'

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BillyslateBillyslateover 3 years ago

Disappointed In Story's New Lack Of Focus!!

The author commenced with what appeared to be a "Nice Lesbian Dominant Storyline", which continued on with as such a theme in Pt. 02. Now the storyline seems have "emerged into" basically many various sexual escapades, without any plot.

The story is becoming just series of irrelevant sexual events sex driving the writing versus the writing evolving into the sexual aspects of the story. This is okay for those with a preference this type of reading of flouncing from sex scene to sex scene with a strap-on theme. There seems to be a definite lack of focus on any type of story continuity.

I certainly would prefer the author to reestablish the initial storyline theme of Pts. 01 / 02, for my continued reading of My Lesbian Sugar Mama.

A 5*-Star Beginning Has Currently Become 2*-Star Rated Sex Scenes In Pt. 03!!!

Graison89Graison89over 3 years ago

Интересно. Но немного разочарован. Ожидал развитие сюжета в сторону подруг главной героини. И что они поучаствуют в лесбийской оргии. особенно миленькая Кэт.

jimd556jimd556over 3 years ago
Typical

It's super boring and frustrating when the straight girl never goes down.

luvs2watchu2luvs2watchu2about 3 years ago

While not as much sex as your first two chapters, it is still very erotic. I do hope the sexual activities greatly increase in the future chapters. Still 4 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This series is great. Love it.

PhilLustyPhilLusty11 months ago

Love this series. So hot

kbone1kbone17 months ago

OMG! This is soooo hot and erotic

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