All Comments on 'My Life before You Ch. 02'

It's so nice to read a story without saying how long is cock is, like a 10 incher. That gets pretty boring. Very well thought out chapter!

I loved both parts and thought your writing was wonderful.

These two definitely deserve another chapter

You definitely need to continue this story as it has so many options for twists and turns!

Please, in future writing, get help if needed, but clean up "see, saw, have seen." There were some other grammar/tense errors, but the 'seen' error has carried over from your earlier stories and it seems to hit every third or fourth paragraph. Very distracting! (I wouldn't bother commenting, but your story concepts and execution are to good to have these trivial distractions.)

Why don't you make yourself known and I'll reach out to you when I have a submission. You could edit my work and rid me of my messy grammar. Let me know.

It would be like getting a nice hard cock and your partner walking away. Such a wonderful story line it needs more chapters. And I need to know her screen name she is going to use.

I love your writing and am especially loving this story! I disagree that the grammatical errors detracted from the story! This is HOT! I hope you will post more chapters to this story soon! Can't wait for more!

Got to my home page and saw you had added another chapter. That was great. Look forward to continue reading more chapters. Will be awaiting to see .

And the porn industry is just so grand isn’t it, we need to glorify it here.

John is a sleazebag, His actions with Melissa show us that. Poor girl, won’t keep her boyfriend long as she sinks into the fetid waters of the industry, her life fucked. Porn is not glamorous it is destructive. Please don’t try to showcanything different.