All Comments on 'My Life in a Trailer Park Ch. 01'

I like the way you write. With few words, the characters come alive. The writing is sparse but powerful, sort of like Hemingway.

It amy be a fine story, but when I read your opening lines about a 40 year old man who locked his car keys in his trailer and his trailer keys in his car, I gave up. Anyone that stupid can't be worth reading about.

60 year old George

Probably should re publish as it's good, and not much commented on.

Characters seemed real, dialog was good. and erotic. I liked that the guy wasn't bitter about his wife. realistic.

What is the name of that writing style where you write as if you are displaying content as it occurs?

Honest guess, string of conciousness?