All Comments on 'My Life is You Ch. 01'

I'll be back to see where this goes, but really, you could have told us what happened to the other guy.

The beginning is good it had me up to where you stopped. I looked for more at the very bottom of the page. Was the accident his fault, did it happen before leaving the party or at the house of the party? You LSFT A lot unsaid. Was this your intent?

Wow! What a way to start a story! Yeesh! I love the way you set everything up...almost like a movie... fade out just as the car accident happens to there's no gore.... fade in at the hospital two weeks later. Brilliant! While I'm frustrated at being left hanging, I must admit, a truly great artist always leaves the audience wanting more. :-) Keep up the great work! I, meanwhile, shall dive into the other chapters :-D