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by Ms_Kaycee
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maineman4uover 14 years agoOver 18?
This was a good first start. Try to add some suspense (arousal) leading up to the fuck and suck. Also, you mentioned you thought he was "14" years old (OOPS!) MAKE your characters at least 18.
morefunnover 14 years agoGreat Introduction
Nice read and keep going. Thanks for sharing and look foreward to more of your adventures.
fleetusaover 14 years agoExcellent bio story
Great. And you even mentioned the sensitive cock after cuming...writers often ignore that.
Anonymousabout 14 years agolook at the story again, Maineman4u
she did not say he was 14. she said her aunt's description of him led her to think of him as 14
Anonymousabout 14 years agoShort, but you got the point.
Your style is different....interesting. Very descriptive, without a lot of chit chat. Now onto your second submission.
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