All Comments on 'My Little Boo'

Love it really hot n sexy. you could make this a series. I love to read a nice sibling romance.

Couple of errors here and there but overall a good read. I think you could make it a series.

Do not, under any circumstances give Tylenol tom someone who has been drinking alcohol.

It can damage, or literally kill your your kidneys. Look up alcohol acetaminophen interaction

Please, keep writing in this category! This was a great story.

Very hot with an interesting story line.

Next up, brother and sister need to give their parents a grandchild, and eventually get their blessing for their relationship. Then move out of state after she graduates, to a place no one knows them, so they can live as husband and wife.

gotta be a family now, get her knocked up, even getting married really isnt an issue....

Quite enjoyable.

Very erotic story.

“ flexed her mussels”? Probably need to get a proofreader

LOVED IT.HOW ABOUT A CHAPT 2

Thank you, I now know the meaning of the word 'mediocre.'

Very hot! 5 Stars. Keep going with these two.

Mussels? Really? Average but not bad.

Nice!

Not too many word to take space. right to the point. I enjoyed it. Short but enjoyable.

Miss my little sis!

Muscles, not mussels

More, please

Just one little touch. And this is the second time through this excellent story. The paragraph where, after moving in, she dragged you in to ‘our’ bedroom. While on top she was sliding just right while you “tweeted” her nipples. I admit this typo did draw out a giggle, I’m sure you meant ”tweaked”, but it made my evening.

"Boo"?? Come on. Better names out there than Boo!

There's a lot to like about this story, but it also has some major issues. In the beginning when Donna is giving David grief over the fact that he's naked in bed, she's a little bit too hard core for a little sister who has been crushing on her big brother for many years. That really takes a lot of the pleasure out of her revealing her true feelings for David and giving him head. It came away feeling self serving and trite. Also there's the following quote:

"I WANT you to use me. Use me however you wish, as long as it makes you feel good."

Yeah, that's a bridge too far. 😕 Totally outside of her established character. Absolutely schizophrenic. Dual personality.

Once you moved past the reversal and the story smoothed out, the love that David and Donna shared for each other was very satisfying. I enjoyed Donna's remarks about dating Josh only because he physically resembled David. I'm looking forward towards reading the next part. 4/5

4 Stars, a couple of typos, but the story is good and interesting. Wish I had a sister like Boo.

No real buildup, bit of a weak explanation of her feelings, and then just wham, he reciprocates.