All Comments on 'My Little Cousin has Grown Up'

"I took of the condom and tossed it out the car window into to the woods."

A very hot story! 5 * Thanks for your time and efforts.

There were a few parts where it almost became interesting. There were a few instances where you used a wrong word, although your spelling was surprisingly good. Now, see the small item in my review just after "word" and then again after "Now"?

Those commas are very important.

"For the most part my sister, and two of my cousins we were all close in age and we were our own play friends. " - doesn't make sense.

Maybe

"For the most part my sister and two of my cousins (we were all close in age) were our own play friends."?

Is this just one example of how little Proof Reading you did?

This cracks me up when people have nothing better to do than rip apart someone's story. This is not a litature class. It's erotic porn. I don't watch porn for the incredible acting skills!

Ass to mouth without cleaning your cock first? Do you realize the bacteria that is being transferred to the mouth, then swallowed?

I know this is just fiction, but at least use common sense in your writing.

Decent story but you have a hard time using sentences don’t you?

A lot of seed getting shot all over the place. Just like the good 'ol days.

Every teenage boy apparently had a mature woman that took their virginity and taught them about sex.