All Comments on 'My Love with a Swimmer'

This story could have been very interesting except it's WAY too long. I am looking for short stories on this site, not complete books.

I think the story was wonderful. The background provided a sense of reality making the action all the more special. Delving into their emotions really helps bring the characters to life. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Very sweet story. It doesn’t matter how long the story is. There was some editing errors and need to flesh out some more of the characters to make a really substantial story. All in all a nice read!

... Would have been excellent if there was at least a strong test to their love than just sex sex sex sex. But a good read though. Kudos

You must have tried most of what you wrote about or you couldn't have described it so well..... Or is it something you wish had happened....Sort of long,but I loved it..AAAAA+++++ rating.

Really liked the plot and appreciated that it was long but still came to a conclusion (unlike many authors who leave us on an eternal cliffhanger!). Also, props for keeping each sex scene hot and exciting not repetitive. Biggest suggestion is to make sure that you read through the draft and have someone else do so before publishing because there we’re a number of places with misspellings or the wrong word. Nonetheless, I enjoyed your story and hope to see more from you!!

Great Love Story. Thank you for developing their love and strong bond.

Can't wait for your next story.

You are an EXCELLENT writer!!!! I do agree with need2readit misspellings and wrong words so reading the draft and having another read it to help with them is a Great Idea!!! I ENJOY a long story from time to time and I INSTANTLY added this to favorites and following you! Now I’m off to read your next EXCELLENT story!!!

This was a beautiful and sweet story!

This was a BEAUTIFUL love story! I'm a sucker for happy endings. 1 point of agreement and disagreement:

Agree: DEFINITELY have someone read it to catch typos and errors

Disagree: NOT too long at all!

I have read (and loved) your other works but somehow missed this, your first. I enjoyed the novella form here and I found a lot of the typos endearing. Everyone loves a good ducking! Those oops leave me with the impression that this story, their story, just poured out of you quickly. I’m also a little exhausted from just reading their sex life! Absolutely Five Stars and I’m already a Follower. Thank you for sharing your wonderfully filthy imagination with us.

Wow…. What a fantastic story, loved it . Please keep writing you’re amazing

Very good story except for the occasional word mistakes. Thank you, and keep writing.!