by Daddysgirlfl
Hot damn, I knew this was getting 5 stars as I read the seduction scene, his wasn't the only one getting hard, sorry if that's a bit crass but that's the effect your words have! I will be watching for the next chapter eagerly.
Cheers, Andy
This is a perfect 'mise en bouche', which sets up chapter 2 for the hors d'oeuvres. My appetite has been whetted! I can't wait for the main course.
I believe I said this to you before, but I must repeat myself: erotica by a female author is so titillating, but you, my lady, take it to new heights . This piece was a romantic story tinged with very tasteful eroticism. Your writing took me not just into the story, it lured me into the lives of two highly sensual people, made for each other. Well done. 5*