by Daddysgirlfl
After part one I was expecting the reveal to be at the funeral of his wife, nicely done with the extra twist. She is a naughty woman, loving her character. Love to have seen her making breakfast with her ass hanging out, an unfulfilled fantasy :)
A super hot one but your stories always are! Been with you since "Boiled Peanuts". Always a pleasure finding one of your offerings in my reading list. Be safe and keep writing your fans need you.
Cheers
SAGE
Another great story. I love unlce/niece stories as much as dad/daughter, but they are hard to find (where they are actually blood related) Also another of my favorite trope is surprise relations (or oops I didn't know you we were related) and you put an interesting spin on that. I really enjoy the way you write thanks for sharing, looking forward to part 3!
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I see 8 comments before this one, all praising the storyline and your writing skills. And, I'm happy to point out, the look of it all is fantastic, all cleaned up.
As in all your writing (all I know is here on Literotica), your passion is there for all to feel in the descriptions and story flow.
Your writings, and therefore, we believe, YOU are dearly loved by us and we all encourage you to finish some of the older storylines.
Don't keep your characters imprisoned due to some trolls who 'bear false witness' in the comments. It appears proofreading, also known as due diligence, has made this chapter a nice smooth read.
Plesse keep it up.
Angus