All Comments on 'My Loving Pet'

It's quite clear you spent a lot of time getting this together for us - thank you, I enjoyed this story very much.

I enjoyed the sensuality and atmosphere. The poem at the end was the perfect touch.

As for ideas for future stories - if you write them - in one scenerio she deserves to be shown off to several other customers at a private party and then spanked and forced to spend the rest of the night in exhibitionistic humiliation while her bare and punished body is open to the view of everyone.

"Sir" and "pet". Could it have been anymore cliched?

It seems to me those limits he seeks to test are well and long established. His actions at the first store are mildly annoying, the play of a boy and thus forgivable. His actions at the second store are more troubling. They seem a violation of the one he professes to love dearly. What value does this store clerk hold in relation to his pet? None. What happened was done only to feed his ego. A costly meal.