by Azrael556
nice work with the little touches of detail to build realism. for example "a pair of 230-grain Remington Golden Saber hollowpoints into his chest, following up with one to the head"
Thank you for wasting my time reading your misspelled drivel, you drooling moron. Go back to 4chan.
Yet another "Anonymous" critic who not only inflicts his or her ignorance of BDSM practices and dynamics on those of us who choose to read in this category, but his or her ignorance of basic rules of grammar and spelling as well. If you don't like these stories, DON'T READ THEM. If you can't own up to your criticisms, don't post them. If you can't spell, don't inflict your stupidity on others.