All Comments on 'My Midlife Awakening Pt. 01'

Good for you. Life is short!

HAVE FUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN!

It’s a very good story, and believable if not true. I would have loved it to have been a bit slower, with more details about both the individuals worked into it (physical descriptions, etc.) and the acts that they participated in. Please keep writing!

Good story for a first time. It felt rushed, especially the first two times with Steven. I do look forward to reading more

The story is much like many others. Try to make your stories unusual. something out of the ordinary. I hope it was based on your own experience. That always makes it exciting.