by apple231601
It's been a long time. You managed to get this thick ten inches up...see you soon.
Miss Lovely has managed to floor James Michael two days in a row!When I woke this morn I was already ready with two sperm greanades ready to blow!!! Beast of burden
P.S.Write me about you
...unless you're lacking bravery
I love the story, but I think it would have been better if it wasn't so ridiculously exaggerated with a yard sized cock that's as wide as an ale mug that she actually gets fucked by. It makes it just silly really. The rest of it is really good. I like how he handled her husband and his men.
Squatting naked over my cum bucket... jacking it with the sound of your sweet feminine voice filling my basement.... and hearing you describe such filthy things... Well, if I thought your stories were good before! They become a wicked tease when you give them your voice. You goaded me and wrung two heavy loads from my balls this morning. I will need to empty the bucket today. Fantastic writing, my Lady. -ARJ
great story and good delivery, but perhaps you should practice a little more before recording the final audio.
The sex scene at the end might have been ridiculously improbable, but the enthusiasm of your narration swept me along regardless and it excited me in the nastiest way possible. Yum!
Your delivery hiccuped a few times, and you really could do with taking longer pauses between sentences, at least at the beginning before the action hots up, but I'm sure that'll come with practice. And I look forward to hearing you practice. Many times!
:-)
I couldn't stop playing with myself as I read this story. Just the way Oluth handled her with his enormous dick drove me wild!
What a way to destroy a good story. Let someone who not only can't pronounce the words but can't read it with any feeling or flow, (if you get what I trying to say). This narrator was badddd plain and simple. Next time practice before someone before reading a story and see what their opinion is.
I don't know where you get it it's truly amazing how you can say some things you said with a straight face tonight laugh your ass off it was good
love it!!!!! She should fuck his horns!!! Lucky girl!!!
The whole series is amazing really. But the starting premise is genious.
Incredible! Bravo! 1000 bravos! Standing ovations all around! Hilarious, well-paced, and INCREDIBLY hot. This is perfect! 20/10.
Perfect illustration for this story.
http://40.media.tumblr.com/fa4a8cf21671f60a572f6bb8f35fbfb2/tumblr_o5moc8E9aQ1taok5so1_1280.jpg
... failed big time. (http://40.media.tumblr.com/fa4a8cf21671f60a 572f6bb8f35fbfb2/tumblr_o5moc8E9aQ1taok5so1_1280.j pg)
I don't care how many times I hear it, I never get tired of a woman say "how horrifically good your hung WHORE-splitting spunk cannon feels inside my cream cauldron!!!"