by galadim
Great first story, although you could have continued the story. Maybe a second chapter about how things evolved. Did you get Katie pregnant and start a family??
Even better when taboo. A very well written story in both content and mechanics.
@ Anonymous & pregnant:
Are you one of those insecures that need a pregnancy to make you a man?
I had a vasectomy at 18, and have never regretted it. Actually nearly every woman I've fucked was happy that I could not get her pregnant.
Bravo! Well done for a first story! Keep this one going or give us more of your fantasyland. Take us where you want us to go and we will follow if you continue to write this well.
Not bad, but after reading a few dozen stories this one was pretty predictable and didn't have any surprises, seemed like you took other stories and mashed them into one, moving to another town, that is the ending of every incest story on this site, the mud fight was a nice touch but you ended it too fast and there was nothing sexy about it, felt like you were speeding thru the story and didn't let things develop properly
Vasectomy at 18 the natural progression of a a mf relationship is children if wanted not a mark of being a man.just because you didn't want the responsibility of parenthood doesn't mean you are less of a man.oh wait you cut a part of your dick so I guess you are less of a man.idiot