All Comments on 'My Mom, My Fantasy'

I see no need for more.

Do more this was hot

that was too short

most story on here take to long to get to the sex

but your went by way to fast

no details about the boy and none about the mom

You have done a good job of setting the scene of a boy's confused infatuation with his mother. Don't go too quickly to the consummation. Toy with the reader. Escalate the confusion that he feels in his fantasy and surprise the reader with a clever conclusion.