by EJWrites
You have done a good job of setting the scene of a boy's confused infatuation with his mother. Don't go too quickly to the consummation. Toy with the reader. Escalate the confusion that he feels in his fantasy and surprise the reader with a clever conclusion.
that was too short
most story on here take to long to get to the sex
but your went by way to fast
no details about the boy and none about the mom