by masterofnymphoslut
This is completely not what I'm into. Ive kept reading as I want to know how it plays out. Cuck etc I'm not a fan of but it's a real interesting story. You've written it well in that it brings the reader to choose a side really. Either supporting what the couple are doing or not I'm defo in the camp that wants the father to get some sort of revenge meaning a unhappy ending for the mother and son. Nicely written.
You have destroyed what started out as a promising story that could have gone in many different ways. Instead, it morphed into a story of misguided hate. I’m sorry, but I can't read the chapters that follow.
This story could have been far better than it turned out! An element of sadism has been combined with love and hate mixed together.