All Comments on 'My Mom the Cowgirl MILF Pt. 01'

Hope she is off the pills ...and what they did gives her more hope for the future.

What killed the horse????

loved it

Loved this story. Keep up the good story and writing. A 5 for sure.

Jagged trees and sticks are notorious for tearing open spooked horses bellies. It just seemed to fit the flow of the story at that moment.

Took too long to get going... but maybe the next chapter will improve.

Well done I liked the slow build up to when mum & son finally came together. Now that the relationship is established I hope for a sexy and very erotic next part as they become lovers.

Old joke

- Is it possibly to rape woman on the square?

- No.

- Why?

- Too many advisers

That wasvwell written enjoyed it.

Lucky guy........ great story, looking forward to another chapter....... maybe sis will join in.......???

Awesome work

Amazing story telling can't wait for the next chapter!

can't wait for part 2

Great story and very well written. I'm looking forward to the next installment, but please don't send them down the road of random multiple sex partners. I feel It would ruin the tenderness and intimacy of their bond that you have portrayed so well to date.

A great start! Well done!

very hot!… And seeing how you know how to structure a sentence, and structure a paragraph, and actually spell correctly is so refreshing here on lit… Thank you… Oh and get your ass in gear and do chapter 2… Mommysbabyboy says, "more please?"…

really 3 pages and nothing

bbc gangbang

I like this story so far. Very good characters. Thanks.

I was really enjoying this story up until the sex scene. It was hard to envision their bodies contorting in the way you described. I had no idea at times if they were standing or sitting, facing each other or away from each other. The logistics were completely off. Maybe use an actual bed next time instead of a couch to make it easier. Outside of that, this is nicely written!

I stumbled across this story by accident and I'm very glad I did. A well crafted opening instalment with a good plot line, characterisation and story arc. Not your usual one-page spank-fest at all and I for one am looking forward to chapter two. 5 stars for me.

Great story. Heading to chapter 2. Five Stars.

Good start. Earlier comments cover my thoughts. 5 stars.

Excellent. Maor characters developed in depth and breadth. Plot developed and progressed logically. The emotional and sexual development of the son is good. Development of the mother's maternal and sexual self was good. The characters sensitivity to each other emotional needs was precisely how I would expect a real-life incestuous love affair to begin. So far, this story depicts how I imagine a real world incestuous love relationship would began between mother and son who possess maturity; are secure in self identify; consider themselves as equal partners mutually consenting to said affair without fear of emotional abandonment nor positional powerplay. 5 star rating.

Real as hell.

slow burn then a wonderful explosion, well worth the wait.

Superb!

Nice concept for a story, but man, seriously, get yourself a proofreader.