All Comments on 'My Moms a Cum Dumpster!?'

Not a big fan of the "I'm the smallest and weakest amongst all the males in my life, so I'm happy with watching"-theme in the first place, but the typos and bad grammar really killed the story for me.

please don't continue.

Please quit writing.

Terrible story, terrible description, terrible plot. Not relatable or believable at all. Your writing style is atrocious.

i agree....find an editor PULEEEEESE

It was ok except it would have been better if dad had left or died. Leaving only mom and son, for his 18th bday she gave him a BJ and they became lovers. Then the team saw him sneak into her room and heard sex sounds. To keep them quiet she had a gang bang...

Poor grammar and spelling.

Don't pay attention to the other comments - it was enjoyable and would love a second chapter.

Now you got big shoes to fill as this was way to short...

Thanks for the comments I know the grammar and mistakes are pretty bad I honestly just put this out because I was inspired by this one story that I can’t find the name of, so if you guys can help me that’d be awesome. It’s about this guy who’s parents have to live with him while his wife’s in the hospital pregnant and he ends up fucking the mom and then the dad ends up fucking three sons wife and it has multiple parts. Any ideas?

Didn't care for it no incest!!!!!!!!!!! a 2

Pls write the 2 ch, this is good story

Good start to what I hope will be continued story