All Comments on 'My Month in Malta'

by gapster7

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JeouxChevalJeouxChevalover 3 years ago
Well done, as always

Such a fan of your work, you really inspire my stories. A chapter two of this would be fantastic.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

A very hot and entertaining story. I agree with the previous comment a sequel would be enjoyable but if a stand alone you provided a very satisfying finish to the piece. Truly crafted by an experienced master story teller. Thank you for sharing your craft, talent and fantasy.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Always a winner with Gapster

Another great story. Well done and excellently paced.

darkestclouddarkestcloudover 3 years ago
Lovely story

Your lust for women is so beautifully expressed in your description of Sammy. Thank you for writing yet another juicy story to get wet to, gapster7.

island_manisland_manabout 3 years ago
Mellieha well explained

As a Maltese guy, your description is excellent. Hot story indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You still have two more weeks to tell us about in Malta, with Sammy and her spectacular breasts. Please don't leave us hanging!

bigreddog543bigreddog54310 months ago

A fun story. As a stand alone, I think the ending wasn't the best. Maybe taking it over to Sunday morning and including a goodbye as Sammy left to see her mother might have worked. Seeing the other couple left room for a future. I could see the woman in white turning up at his door soon-------

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