All Comments on 'My Mother Bullied My Friend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Vomit

This was utter and complete garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Stop with the comments!

Stop it people! This is a free site where new authors can write what they want and learn how to write stories. Give them constructive criticism and stop being a douche! Most of the stories on this site are unrealistic but they are for entertainment! Get over yourselves!

TeenStudforOlderWomenTeenStudforOlderWomenover 4 years ago
Nice Story

I enjoyed this story - just like your other stories.

Keep up the good work.

anon9854anon9854over 4 years ago
very good

I love the dirty talk you added to this story, but, for future interests, the sex scenes could be more detailed

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
rubbish

the start was gorgeous, but from the middle you really turned it into shit, yuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I like your story very much, gave you a 4+ (🌟🌟🌟🌟+)!

:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Crap

What a piece of shamefull crap

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