by Jayden_1
Stop it people! This is a free site where new authors can write what they want and learn how to write stories. Give them constructive criticism and stop being a douche! Most of the stories on this site are unrealistic but they are for entertainment! Get over yourselves!
I enjoyed this story - just like your other stories.
Keep up the good work.
I love the dirty talk you added to this story, but, for future interests, the sex scenes could be more detailed
the start was gorgeous, but from the middle you really turned it into shit, yuck.