by shadowrnr
My daughters MIL was some 20 years older than me and discovered she worked with me so it was very easy to start an affair which lasted 7 years, right up to 2 hours before she passed away. I don't think anyone else knew about it
You have a winning story here, and you are a good storyteller, but you need work on your writing craft. Somehow your style seems lacking. One thing I can see is the long paragraphs. For some reason, what is good paragraph length in print, becomes a problem when read off a monitor--it's just a fact of life, so shorten them. Also try working in more dialogue in the next chapter--it'll greatly improve the finished product.
Good Luck! cd
My mother in law is 69 and she loves sex. She's slightly heavy but has nice long tits and a really furry pussy. Her husband is retired from a local hospital bbSo it has become harder to get her alone. My wife is very nice looking but her mother is the best lay I have ever had.
I see that you posted the same story a second time, but did not continue this story!
Do you plan to add chapters?
Great story. I would have enjoyed it more thoroughly if you had had someone proofread it and correct your poor grammar.