All Comments on 'My Mother's Entrapment'

Love a picture of Stella though.

Keep writing.

Thank you.

your bio, I understand now why there are grammar errors in your story. Being from Spain, English is not your original language. While the errors distracted from your story being an easy read - your sentences ran on and on broken by commas and not with periods - the story line was good. Try using an editor who is more knowlegible in English to proof-read your stories. Your writing talent is only diminished by the lack of good grammar and proper punctuation. Keep writing!

Terrible just....slit you wrists