All Comments on 'My, My, My'

A well-written short story. But so short as to almost be abrupt. A little more than two paragraphs on the sexual encounter would have been nice.

Wow! A lot of punch packed in to an economy of words. Would love to read more.

A waste of time. Not even a story. More like a couple of paragraphs from someone else's story.

I never do understand this "incest is contagious and/or hereditary" trope. The thing that makes it hot is the secret, taboo nature of it. If everybody in the entire story is into it, it loses everything that made it hot to begin with. Now it's just rabbits fucking every hole they can find in the lettuce patch.

A total waste of pen and ink!

Dang - nice start!

5* I think it’s great as it is.

They’re not wrong, though. It is short. So short that if you just came for the sex, you’d be disappointed. If any shorted I’d be wondering about a punchline.

And the taboo aspect can add a lot. To each his own but I really thought it was good. I’ll be checking out your other tales.

Tc

please continue

To short and not well thought out

Hey, all. I've written a few stories here, and they are all pretty normal. This one was an experiment. I wanted, for no other reason than to see if I could, to create a real, viable story using as few words as possible. So, here, I have created a cast of characters (with names!), put them in a sexual situation, created some conflict, and given a resolution, all in 750 words. That's the shortest allowable story length. I thought I did pretty well. Y'all beg to differ... this is my lowest-rated story. (Hangs head sadly... sniffs quietly) Anyway, I liked it and I've written a sequel. Guess how many words!

Boo don’t tease post please… I wanna know

BelleDeVilleneuve, I'm not teasing! I wrote a 750-word sequel and a 1100-word finale wrapping it all up, and both have been submitted. I intentionally wanted to do something that was really short but still pretty hot. Mainly because most of my other works are fairly long. In fact, the one I'm waiting to get published is my second-longest single story (no sequels) at 27,000 words. So all three have been submitted and we're just waiting for them to be published. Maybe by Christmas???

not to bad. would have added a little more in the beginning to set the stage

OMG! WyndsofChange, oh ok now I’m excited.

Also sorry I’m kind of a Brat soooo lol yea

Shortest story? How about the shortest rating? 5*

BJ