by Dnthmn_19
That captures that first moment, very nicely. That's erotica, not porn. Nice work.
The wide variety of sex was well demonstrated here. The learning and exploring of two people so erotic. I still can't figure out the last paragraphs of Chapter one. There seemed to be some nostalgia and sadness about the wording. There wasn't any of that in his rendition of the story. I'll wait for three to further explain her Bi relationships.