All Comments on 'My Name is Dave Ch. 01'

by davas

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willowview43willowview43almost 8 years ago
Wow

That story is a fave fantasy of mine - would love to be raped over and over by a burglar. And your telling of it had me hard and wet all the way through. Can't wait for part two.

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsalmost 8 years ago
Such a turn on!

Definitely, one of my fantasies as well. I can't wait to see what you make Dave do next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
A couple friendly suggestions

Use different terms for spanking it - that got repetitive. Was unclear how he got on the floor and turned around if his hands were tied. Also, when did the guy untie his legs - did I miss that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I want some of that

That was HOT my mind is spinning and I think I will have to find a site like that , You have my but throbbing just thinking of it . That was nice no pressure just what you wanted and you got it (lucky you ) XXX

lickingusoftlylickingusoftlyalmost 8 years ago
Making fantasy into your memorable reality

This was one hot fucking story. Being taken and forced to have oral and anal sex like that is so erotic and mind blowing. The idea of setting it up so it happens with a degree of safety and doesn't go past your off limits desires but leaves you vulnerable to his desires and the anonymous sex not knowing for sure who he is or what he looks like was great. I jacked off twice just writing this comment give me more sir thank you

WMLA44WMLA44over 6 years ago
Well Written Gay Erotica

This is a very well written erotic gay story and the writer should be commended. I hope he continues this story and also produces more erotic stories. Thank you!

IronDick2018IronDick2018about 6 years ago

Is this a real website? Can you post the link?

davasdavasabout 6 years agoAuthor
Real Website?

Don't I wish! No, as far as I know, this site is fictional. Maybe someone will make a fortune making it real...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
An occasional fantasy of mine

Very well-written story. My cerebral addition is that Dave's landlady has his apartment wired for video voyeurism is and watching avidly.

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