by jackiegirl199
AWESOME story.. I think you did a great job on it.I would have loved to be sitting in front of you while you trying on the shoes and Bobby was cool also. I was thinking Bobby was me in the story omg did I ever cummmmm. I stroked my cock like no tomorrow.. Thanks again and keep the stories cumming..
wanted? She didn't go out and fuck every man within a 50 mile radius? She didn't fuck his friend, his boss, their neighbors or any relatives? She just told him what she wanted and he worked to provide her with a better experience? How in the hell did that happen? The wife is supposed to keep secret her disappointment with her sex life. Then she is supposed to cheat with other men to find her sexual fulfillment. That is how these stories are supposed to work. The husband is not supposed to know that his wife is not getting the best sex possible. He is supposed to be clueless!
If you continue to write stories like this; with loving couples, who love and respect and talk to each other, I think I will.......I will.......have to read every damn one of them, giving them the highest scores possible and recommending them to everyone I know.
No Cheating, No cuckold, No Lieing, No backstabbing!
A real loving woman telling her man how she wants to be loved and he took the lead! Only if all women were like this
We wouldn't have all thes stupid cheating stories that bore me. This story was hot and got a well deserved "5"!!!!
I would like to see more stories like this! Perfect!
Thanks so much for a real loving wives story!
Sexmate
Fucking hot story, Jackie, and you're obviously a fucking hot woman!
Wow! I can't wait to read more of Jackiegirl's submissions! Well written and unbelievably erotic! Keep it up, girl!
I have a special place in my heart (and my pants) for Jackie. This is such a hot, loving and sexy story. Tender communication between a loving couple that lets them explore heightened sexuality together - and we get to join the fun! Oh to be a shoe salesman in Jackie's town . . .
We want to read the "Rest of the Story!"
story. Everything was perfect, even down to the breast size. IMHO anything bigger than that is distracting and not part of the package. Good writing!
This work is perfect. The pace is excellent. The style amazing. The sensuality mind blowing. If I had the tallent to produce this quality I would make a very good living as an erotic writer. I cannot thank you enough for sharing.
Don't like pierced nipples!! Jackie should have gotten some strange fucking.
This author really knows how to write a sexy story. This one was hot as hell. Definitely Five Star worthy.
Jackie,
Your words are so arousing and the style in witch you seduce your readers are over the top.
Your stories suck me right into being part of the whole fantasy with you.
That takes a lot of talent to be able to do that with the written word alone.
I still want to know or should I say need to know why you have stopped submitting any stories sense 2005?
I sure hope it wasn't from a bad experience on here or in your personal life that made you stop.
You are a very talented writer author and should continue to share.
Thank you, Smiles to you :-)