All Comments on 'My Name is Maggie and I Eat Poopy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What the..?!

Almost seems gross just to be gross. Tries a little too hard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wrong place

This revolting rubbish belongs in the fetish category

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Why?

If a story is meant to be erotic, why make the characters ugly, retarded, and unlikeable?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
no good

U dont use handicap people stop using turd and using eating my turds from my bowel movement nothing attractive about this shit at all

davedingy1701davedingy1701over 8 years ago
Nice Job

I like this and the prequel they are both nicely written and really quite erotic. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Seems unnecessary.

I like the story overall. But the mental handicap seems unnecessary. It's been a while since I read the first part, but I don't remember any indications of the girl being mentally slow. It seems like you added it in just to somehow make the situation "worse" somehow. I think it works against the story though.

Regardless of that detail, like I said. I like the story overall, and I look forward to reading a third part.

franmichelefranmicheleover 7 years ago
VERY EROTIC

I love both chapters - a total turn- on. Would love to see a third chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
she should put in her mom's nose

she should put shit in her mom's nose

Daniels69Daniels69almost 3 years ago

Good that not all stories are the same. Like it a lot!

Re-read it many times. Like the sweaty smelly licking of their feet, assholes, pussies.

And their situation, work and conditions add sexual tension to the story.

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