All Comments on 'My Name Is Pain Ch. 02'

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NyarlasNyarlasover 15 years ago
Mind Blowing!

That was absolutely fantastic! I could not find one thing wrong with it! You've managed to find a perfect balance of plot, romance and erotica. You've just made yourself a fan :)

sinfully_hevanlysinfully_hevanlyover 12 years ago
Pain

What an awesome turn of events!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thoroughly enjoyed this.

I do have one complaint! It is much too short, MORE, please!

This short story has all the elements of a beginning to a wonderful novella.

Thanks, Fantasywriter!

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