by foxxxie
This story reads like it was written by an ill-educated chimpanzee. There is no evidence the author knows English, and that deficiency renders whatever erotic content useless.<p>I see a future flipping burgers, not writing.
Almost cinematic in its presentation, this is more of a multi-sensational drama than an erotic tale. Many thanks to a talented author.
Some of the phrasiology here was quite strange. I felt that she would have taken it up the ass in the circumstances too.
The denouement was very odd.
Hot, and well written story. No comments about misspellings or malapropisms. My wife, a very smart and educated woman, does the same thing. It's a brain thing. You have a talent.