All Comments on 'My Naughty Stepsister Watching Me'

Very nice read, kept me into it the whole way.

Great story with very erotic descriptions. I could almost see Shelly when I closed my eyes.

What a hot story! Looking forward to the next chapter ... and maybe chapter 3 will feature a 3-way?

Really hot. I cant wait for more

Really enjoyed your story telling abilities. Your dialogue was clean. We get a good understanding of Shelly’s character. Will be interesting to see how you build from here. One strength was believability. Please stay disciplined and not go off the deep end.

This story has potential

This was reasonably well written but was disappointing as the title hinted at voyeurism of which there was none and gave away the 'twist' at the end, so was just bulk standard sex story.

Really liked this! What happened to Part 2?

Great story

Really enjoyed part one.. now off to read part two.. 💕

Amazing, love the best friend stories.

Totally hot setup, and great descriptions with Shelly. The ending set up eith Nicole was also top shelf. 5*