All Comments on 'My Neighbor Betty'

I found that you were extremely judgmental, equated money with appearance, and seemed very unfocused in your approach to writing this story

It lost my interest after a few paragraphs

"So naturally the women and the girls were much better looking." Seriously?? What kind of half-assed comment is that?? As though financial status has ANYTHING to do with the attractiveness of a person.......That, added to your rather lame story line and refusal to use any contractions whatsoever causes me to want to give this a rating lower than what I actually did.

Hope this turns into a series of him servicing the whole neighborhood.

Can't wait for next chapter.

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Proofreading helps. It's THEIR, not there. You'll find it.

This tale has a better chance of being under exhibitionist.

For a college boy, your writing sucks.

Thanks for sharing.

So far, so good!

I wanted a few more pages. Good start.

It was a good start for setting up the sexual tension between Betty and the main character. Most authors would dive straight into the sex, but this was nice.