by JackLuis
The humor is crazy and subtle. The comparisons to what this site does to sex life--extremely valid, at least in my opinion (known from experience, as she tries to keep hand off clit). It is a nice read. Thanks for writing it and would like to see more like this.
I'm not sure why you posted this one in Humor & Satire, but it is nice story with just enough sweetness that makes me think it could have gone in Romance. No matter, I like the way you portray the relationship between the author, the editor, and the text. I never thought of my editors sharing my work with spouses, but you showed me the erotic potential in that. I, too, like alliteration, but remember that a little does go a long way.