All Comments on 'My New Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Industrial Revolution

Great, innovative story.

A bit boostful, but humorous.

Please continue with a followup on this son.

Same rules, I assume ?

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayabout 18 years ago
What to think??? well,

i liked it...very different but also very cool in many ways...thanks for sharing with us and hope to read more from your indepth mind of fantasies. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Is this a parody?

The story contains almost every cliche in the little boy in the candy shop genre

laurambelllaurambellalmost 15 years ago
Bravo

This story has been enjoyable. Not quite erotic, but erotic enough. I loved it. The story was perfect.I hope you continue with this series.

pinkpill222pinkpill222over 11 years ago
Easy and Fun to Read

The story was easy to read and held my interest. Some stories get long and boring but the erotic descriptions made this story fun to read. The sex toys and machines were a good addition and made the reader pause and try to imagine what kind of a toy was being described. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

in out, next cunt ... ho hum

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story initially, though towards the end I started to lose interest. It seemed like he was just keeping score. Intentional or not, I was disinterested.

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