by techsan
Great, innovative story.
A bit boostful, but humorous.
Please continue with a followup on this son.
Same rules, I assume ?
i liked it...very different but also very cool in many ways...thanks for sharing with us and hope to read more from your indepth mind of fantasies. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
The story contains almost every cliche in the little boy in the candy shop genre
This story has been enjoyable. Not quite erotic, but erotic enough. I loved it. The story was perfect.I hope you continue with this series.
The story was easy to read and held my interest. Some stories get long and boring but the erotic descriptions made this story fun to read. The sex toys and machines were a good addition and made the reader pause and try to imagine what kind of a toy was being described. Good job!
Good story initially, though towards the end I started to lose interest. It seemed like he was just keeping score. Intentional or not, I was disinterested.