All Comments on 'My New Lesbian Friend'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Amazing so soft and exciting thank you for this story I am excited xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I am not "you." I am the reader.

Stories written in first person are almost always annoying, since when writing in this style, the author must presume to tell the reader how she feels and what she does. Third person stories can appeal to a broader audience.

Janet57Janet57about 10 years ago
The Story

The Story Is Good But Next Time Put Your Self In As To Say I'm Doing This To Her. It Would Help Bring The Story out.

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