All Comments on 'My New Life'

by koksocker333

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GybbsGybbsover 4 years ago
mouth watering

You've got me begging for more :-)

N2BiSex4uN2BiSex4uover 4 years ago
Half

...that's half a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ended too soon?

Seems your story ended too soon. I expected at least a little romance/affection. Maybe Mike can kiss Tom, or Tom can see Mike without his shirt, and maybe Mike could have blonde hair on his chest. A sexy sight!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not my version of porn

In my version of porn, people fuck

https://xkcd.com/714/

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Boring!

He made you dinner...wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Way too short

Barely developed anything or either one. Story started off decent but then hit a wall.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It was like taking a vacation to the Bahamas and then being told you can't leave the Airplane! What a letdown!

Sounding22Sounding22over 1 year ago

I think it was great, leave it to one’s imitation. I was in one of those types of marriages and after the divorce I was done with women to.

Hardup4cockHardup4cock7 months ago

WTF? The story was flowing nicely and then it was done.

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I was born in a small town, grew up in a catholic home, went to a French/English school, after grad moved to different parts of Canada, eventually settling in Winnipeg, I am single with two cats, I have a very busy life, with work friends and working out. I enjoy the beach and...

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