by fairydust22
Was this a conclusion to the story? I hope not, because I liked where it was going in chapter 3. Please don't listen to the haters, keep going with that story line!
I like the ending of this chapter but don't end the story there show how he loves her and why he chose to do this to her and does she give in or fight and get away
I really enjoyed this story it was in my opinion well written except for the no editor issue
Its so nice to see this tender scene between your characters, I was beginning to think Uncle James was an unfeeling arsehole.
Well done :)