All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 03 - Dressing up Bliss'

Really, REALLY need to Proof Read before submitting your story.

Rogue first Rouge is an fortunate typo. Wife for with on the other hand . . .

The excitement level grew continually leading to more climaxes than are countable. As reader, I followed along. Then the typos?

I do look forward to subsequent stories. Please, Polish by proof reading.