All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 10'

Found several errors and one sentence left out.

Posted the edited version just now.

I thought Scott liked petite girls! Good story.

Guess I missed another mistake. LOL

Loving the story. I am surprised the gold digger wasn’t waiting naked in his bed the night she found out. It might be a bit cliche but it actually happened to me. Yes, I used her and then showed her the door. Revenge is sweet.

Your writing has gotten to the point of pulling down the storyline. Instead of trying to improve you seem to have made a point of getting worse.

Good luck with you future works.

I confess I found the “5 ton wench” a funny error, but relying on spellcheck doesn’t weed out the wrong words in the right places. Old news now I guess.