All Comments on 'My New Personal Assistant Ch. 03'

That last scene..... man!!!! Thomas was epic with his speech about him being a top

Very nice story that could get very exciting and sexy.

WOW, this was a great story before, but it just got SOOO much better! MLF

Good story but dragging it out too much. Over emphasized the argument with Natasha. Realistically it wouldn’t have gone like that but fantasy is always good.

"You better leave before I make an even more drastic choice." I guess that Natasha was not the only person who had the possibility of getting revenge-fucked.

This is more intense than I thought.

Thanks, Anonymous, for your investment in my story and thinking about it in such depth.

It's not that kind of story when MCs meet and sleep together within the first chapter. That's something I find unrealistic if it's not hookup intended for sex, of course. I try to look deeper into my protagonists and build some kind of connection before that, as people usually do. Not everything you can read. It's as if you would recollect past events. You would only see one POV - yours and only say what stood out the most in your memory :) hence the 1st person past tense :)

Secondly, a conversation between people depends on each character, which is complex and often contradicts itself. For that reason, I try to read scenes with an open mind as I can never know everything that's going on with them, and for that reason, something "realistic" for you may be something "unrealistic" for another person as we all tend to look at situations based on our own experiences :)

I agree; this story is being dragged out.

Interesting... Thank you, for your feedback could you please elaborate so I can understand it better? You mean that Matts and Thomases relationship should develop faster?

You've got me hooked on this story and particularly enjoying the emotional turbulence and dynamics of these 3 characters. Great story telling