by GloriHole
Welcome to Literotica. Love that you got straight to the point, not a slow build up until the boss finally subdues. Be interesting to see where you can go from here. Looking forward to more of this series and any other stories you'd like to share.
Deciding to share your work and thoughts in a public forum like this is not easy, I am not there yet. This is a good start. I am intrigued and would like to see/read more.