All Comments on 'My New Roommate's Girlfriend'

Marvelous premise.

Short, but sweet.

I hope this is just chapter 1, with lots more to follow it.

Five stars.

But you do need an editor/proofreader.

You wrote: "A quick peak through my fingers..." You meant PEEK, not PEAK.

Great story! Hopefully there's more?

So I'd definitely recommend making a second chapter to this. I wont say where to take it, that's your call, but theres more to this story I think. Mandy does not strike me as the sort to stop it at just that.

Great short read.

The story begs for a Part 2!

Part 2 please!

I need a part 2 to this.

What a great BEGINNING! But I think we all NEED to know what happened next!

Just too weird for my taste. Well written and conveys emotion; simply just not to my taste.

Thanks for all the honest feedback! I wasn't really planning on making this a series, but I do have a few ideas that I'm working on expanding. I'll be honest, I have almost no experience writing "creatively," so I can't make any long term promises, but I do have at least a second part to this story almost completed, and with the warm respose, I'd like to at least try to see how this plays out. Any ideas are welcome and much appreciated!