All Comments on 'My Night with Christine'

So do the guys in prison get you drunk before they rape you?

skit instead of skirt. stated instead of started. etc.

I like it when she fights it but in the end loves it.

reminded me if some of my fraternity parties...good story

Hot way to tell the story but it needs a proof read. Also you must have said "asshole" half a dozen times in two paragraphs. Started reading a bit choppy at the end.

Keep writing and just remember to polish up your work a bit more next time.

Hi Peterspleasures

A good read, but you do need to polish it off a little. There are members who will proof read for you.

Mutiger what part of this paragraph does your brain not understand

"Author's Note: This is a work of fiction. The events within this story never happened and are solely created for the reading pleasure of this website."

If you are unable to contribute anything constructive to the debate please shut TF up!

Loved it. Thanks!

19 months on, guess you decided not to follow this up. Pity.