All Comments on 'My Nude Day Starter'

It was a good plot, but the punctuation was terrible and kept me having to guess who was speaking and what was meant. Please proofread or have someone edit your stories before publishing them. But the story was good and hot!

Thumb's up. Fun and hot.

Great story. Society ought to live in a clothing optional lifestyle. One thing missing from this story tho. The women seem to be all bi and go down on each other. But why aren’t the men also enjoying bi sex. I bet they’d love sucking cock and swallowing cum too. Or more. Watching guys playing together is so sexy, a turn on.

Looking forward to more!

He was living a dream. Thank you and I loved the story

Excellent. Very well written.

Had a good flow to this one. Well done. Enjoyed a lot.

More!

A fine story. I usually don't care for incest plots. This one kept me reading. Good Nude Day entry.

This thing screams for a sequel! Well done!

I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.

Good story and can see it continuing.

Thank you for a great story and I hope that there will be more chapters.

Loved the story and hope it continues

Good story. I’d prefer more lead up and encounter details, but good nonetheless.

Wow! This story is one that i will read often. I love the premise of the story. Marcus is one lucky guy. ;-p

great story i loved it

Totally gave this 5 stars. Thoroughly enjoyed it! Wonderful writing. I love the build up of the characters and their reactions in the different scenes. My only thought is that I would like more description of the actual sex acts. What they are feeling and thinking as they get off. Still - great stuff.

This is a good story, but I gave it a 4 because it is too nice.

WOW!!!! LOVED this story.

5 stars, really liked it! Can’t wait to read the next one!

Excellent story.