All Comments on 'My Obsession with Darth Vader Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sexy story

This was a good story about a father having sex with his daughter. It was worth reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Darth

Great story! I like the idea of the dad and brother fighting over Maddy, a fist fight would be sexy if dad won perhaps forcibly taking her in front of Charles would be interesting? Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The dad

The dad is sooooo hot. He is my type of guy

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Eh

Chapter one was rather creepy. It picked up later (introduced a bit of romance) but chapter four is horrible. That was basically just rape and sickening.

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I don't agree with taboo in real life, but in fantasy, I can't stop enjoying it. Visions come to me, torturing me, and I have to write them down. The characters know how dirty it is, but they just can't stop. <33333 God, I love that! Thank you everyone for your suppo...

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