by NaughtyVisions
Chapter one was rather creepy. It picked up later (introduced a bit of romance) but chapter four is horrible. That was basically just rape and sickening.
Great story! I like the idea of the dad and brother fighting over Maddy, a fist fight would be sexy if dad won perhaps forcibly taking her in front of Charles would be interesting? Can't wait for the next chapter.
This was a good story about a father having sex with his daughter. It was worth reading!