All Comments on 'My Old Friend Jill'

I think my wife entertained a day or two before our wedding..

Her wedding present should be his baby bump

Please check the difference between the verbs "lie" and "lay" before your next story. You may have laid the bride, but you lay on the bed so she could get on top of you and lower herself on your phallus. Likewise, she lay on the bed so you could provide some oral pleasure.

something......something....something. etc etc...chuckles. TK U MLJ LV NV

No thought about Art. Not even once. With this being a POV story. His “friend” doesn’t mean a thing to him it seems. 3*

I couldn't do that to my "best friend". So I guess Art wasn't really his friend anyway. What a horrible bride to be. Serves her right if hubby Art cheats with his sexy admin assistant at work or if he has a jib with travel he hooks up on each trip.

....except for the fact that he screwed his buddy along with the wife-to-be.

Other than that, did he bed any of the bridesmaids?

First comment: you THINK your wife entertained a day or two b4the wedding? I dare you to find out!

The marriage needs to be annulled, And the narrator needs to have various parts of his anatomy in various slings.

A bit sad tale of cheating, but don't worry. I am sure there will be another chapter describing how the groom visits his groomsman on the eve of the wedding. Nobody saw the cheeky grin Art gave his friend as the bride walked down the aisle.